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3年生へ。以下の英文の誤っている箇所を指摘して，正しく書き直してみましょう！

I went for a walk around Shibuya and Harajuku Wednesday for a change because Professor Katagiri’s class, which is the only one that I have on the day, was canceled owing to his bad health. Shopping and a walk are the best ways to make me refreshed. Every time I visit Shibuya and Harajuku, I spend at least 3 HOURS on shopping, but actually I spent less time on it than I usually do because I unfortunately did not have so much money to buy clothes. Yes, I am awfully fond of shopping but not a shopaholic. What do you like to do in your free time? I would appreciate if JUNIORS could actively respond to my question or point out grammatical errors in my writing in the comment space.

三年生も積極的に英文を書いてみましょう！間違いまみれの文でも，こなすうちに上達するはずです。コメント欄にも英語でtryしてみましょう。